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marinerblue
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Post subject: Critique my copy Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:00 pm |
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Here are some print ads I did.
Any feedback would be great.
Regards,
Matt
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admin
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 9:51 am |
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Joined: Wed Jan 04, 2006 5:58 pm Posts: 186 Location: Bateau Bay, NSW
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imaginewriter
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Post subject: Dove Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2006 10:44 am |
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Joined: Fri Nov 24, 2006 5:59 am Posts: 16 Location: Vancouver, Canada
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I love your DOVE ad! It's true, women make lists. At least I do. The format of that ad is good in many ways.
I liked your comment. ""It is crucial that copy establishes a strong link between the message and the product so that remembering the copy also means remembering the product." What I got from that is in all things, it comes down to a relationship. A personal relationship between people, the products that stick in our minds. You're right. I remember certain commercials because of the powerful link - the gingle, colors they use, message they instill in your mind, etc.
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marinerblue
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 11:12 am |
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Hi Imaginewriter,
Thanks for your feedback.
For the Dove ad, I was trying to touch on backwards rationalization -- something many women do unconsciously. Is this what you mean by lists?
Regards,
Matt
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Suzanne
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 4:15 pm |
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imaginewriter
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Post subject: on the right track Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 8:20 am |
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