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| Author: | lgreally [ Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:30 am ] |
| Post subject: | I would appreciate a quick look at my sales page! |
Hi everyone Ive created a new sales page and I would really appreciate some feedback. When sent to my list the conversion was about 20%. Now I've launched a PPC campaign, we have not had many conversions yet but the average time spent on the page is over 5 mins. I think maybe people are reading the start and therefore the title and initial copy is good however my call to action is weak. About 30% are clicking the link at the end.. maybe I'm not building enough trust? Anyway would really appreciate some feedback. Have just realised I cant put the link in as I've not posted enough yet. http://www.happybodloseweight.com/report.html Thanks Louise |
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