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 Post subject: Beat Writer's Block with Hypnosis - please critique my copy
PostPosted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:15 pm 
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Hello. I was just wondering if you could please let me know what you think of the impact of this letter:

http://www.slicedot.com/kwb/

I'm interested, of course, in what you think about the quality of the letter itself.

But I also have a few questions about formatting...

- is the Courier font ok?
- have I used enough white space?
- does the letter "flow"?
- do I need to add more pictures or anything to make the text less ... dense?
- is it a good idea to include the price of the product in a subhead? or should i tuck it away in a paragraph?

Last but not least, thanks a lot in advance!

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