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| Author: | marinerblue [ Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:00 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Critique my copy |
Here are some print ads I did. Any feedback would be great. Regards, Matt |
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| Author: | admin [ Thu Nov 30, 2006 9:51 am ] |
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| Author: | imaginewriter [ Fri Dec 01, 2006 10:44 am ] |
| Post subject: | Dove |
I love your DOVE ad! It's true, women make lists. At least I do. The format of that ad is good in many ways. I liked your comment. ""It is crucial that copy establishes a strong link between the message and the product so that remembering the copy also means remembering the product." What I got from that is in all things, it comes down to a relationship. A personal relationship between people, the products that stick in our minds. You're right. I remember certain commercials because of the powerful link - the gingle, colors they use, message they instill in your mind, etc. |
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| Author: | marinerblue [ Sat Dec 02, 2006 11:12 am ] |
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Hi Imaginewriter, Thanks for your feedback. For the Dove ad, I was trying to touch on backwards rationalization -- something many women do unconsciously. Is this what you mean by lists? Regards, Matt |
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| Author: | Suzanne [ Tue Dec 05, 2006 4:15 pm ] |
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| Author: | imaginewriter [ Thu Dec 07, 2006 8:20 am ] |
| Post subject: | on the right track |
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