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 Post subject: Critique my copy
PostPosted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:00 pm 
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Here are some print ads I did.


Any feedback would be great.

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I love your DOVE ad! It's true, women make lists. At least I do. The format of that ad is good in many ways.

I liked your comment. ""It is crucial that copy establishes a strong link between the message and the product so that remembering the copy also means remembering the product." What I got from that is in all things, it comes down to a relationship. A personal relationship between people, the products that stick in our minds. You're right. I remember certain commercials because of the powerful link - the gingle, colors they use, message they instill in your mind, etc.


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Hi Imaginewriter,

Thanks for your feedback.

For the Dove ad, I was trying to touch on backwards rationalization -- something many women do unconsciously. Is this what you mean by lists?

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