Critique my copy

marinerblue · **Joined:** Fri Nov 24, 2006 8:12 am **Posts:** 7

Here are some print ads I did.

Any feedback would be great.

Regards,
Matt

admin · **Posted:** Thu Nov 30, 2006 9:51 am

imaginewriter · **Posted:** Fri Dec 01, 2006 10:44 am

I love your DOVE ad! It's true, women make lists. At least I do. The format of that ad is good in many ways.

I liked your comment. ""It is crucial that copy establishes a strong link between the message and the product so that remembering the copy also means remembering the product." What I got from that is in all things, it comes down to a relationship. A personal relationship between people, the products that stick in our minds. You're right. I remember certain commercials because of the powerful link - the gingle, colors they use, message they instill in your mind, etc.

marinerblue · **Joined:** Fri Nov 24, 2006 8:12 am **Posts:** 7

Hi Imaginewriter,

Thanks for your feedback.

For the Dove ad, I was trying to touch on backwards rationalization -- something many women do unconsciously. Is this what you mean by lists?

Regards,
Matt

Suzanne · **Joined:** Tue Dec 05, 2006 3:43 pm **Posts:** 1

imaginewriter · **Posted:** Thu Dec 07, 2006 8:20 am

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