Hi OC. I found your copy quite easy to read, and as someone who is currently looking for a house to buy, it ticks a lot of the right boxes for me.
As you've not included the bulleted copy containing the "facts" it seemed that some of the more vital information (number of bedrooms and bathrooms) was left a little late in the piece - however, since you've mentioned this is outlined elsewhere, you've done a nice job illustrating the life-style qualities. I also like the way you lead the reader through the house:
Archways lead from the foyer through a formal lounge and on to a dining room,... it's almost like being invited in for a tour.
If I were to suggest any changes it would only be that there seems to be a lot of emphasis on the trees! Not that trees aren't a good thing, but they are mentioned in your opening paragraph, your third paragraph, and then there's mention of bush views in your fourth paragraph. Perhaps you could tie points from these paragraphs in to one single paragraph, then add a few more details about other areas (as a lover of good food, I'd like to read a bit more about the kitchen - but that's purely a personal thing!
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Overall I think you've done a great job! Certainly much better than the hatchet job our real estate agency did for us when we put our house on the market!!
A : )